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acerbicwit) has begun to reread tLS, and when I double checked Occlumency I noticed that the review count had jumped. She's begun reviewing every chapter with a line or two, mentioning things she remembered/forgot, and things that paralleled HBP.
It's really fascinating to get this viewpoint. I don't think I've had anyone (besidesaubrem) reread it and write any sort of review. It's an interesting window into what works and what doesn't.
I think the most interesting bits are where she mentions the few things that I did that actually ended up happening in HBP. I mean, I was totally wrong about a lot of stuff, but there were a few things that turned out to be correct. (I had Dumbledore pick up Harry by himself, and Harry is proud of his friends on the train, for example.)
Thank you, Acerbicwit!! I love the reviews.
Also, I very nearly finished chapter 76, but alas, it was not meant to be. I am slowly and painfully finishing the last conversation and it's taking a bit of time, because it turned out to be more important than I thought. Otherwise, it's all set to go, more's the pity.
acerbicwit) has begun to reread tLS, and when I double checked Occlumency I noticed that the review count had jumped. She's begun reviewing every chapter with a line or two, mentioning things she remembered/forgot, and things that paralleled HBP.It's really fascinating to get this viewpoint. I don't think I've had anyone (besides
aubrem) reread it and write any sort of review. It's an interesting window into what works and what doesn't.I think the most interesting bits are where she mentions the few things that I did that actually ended up happening in HBP. I mean, I was totally wrong about a lot of stuff, but there were a few things that turned out to be correct. (I had Dumbledore pick up Harry by himself, and Harry is proud of his friends on the train, for example.)
Thank you, Acerbicwit!! I love the reviews.
Also, I very nearly finished chapter 76, but alas, it was not meant to be. I am slowly and painfully finishing the last conversation and it's taking a bit of time, because it turned out to be more important than I thought. Otherwise, it's all set to go, more's the pity.