Wavedancer Project: commentary, part five

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I couldn't sleep, and Mike shrugged off all of my attempts at making conversation, so I had to be content with mentally mapping out the rest of my week and the numerous things I had to take care of before I could be satisfied that we could face winter. Soon enough we were approaching the outskirts of Detroit. The traffic became heavier, and Mike became more aggressive, passing cars with abandon and making a mockery of the speed limit. He seemed oblivious to the glares he received from his fellow drivers. I became worried as I covertly watch the speedometer approach ninety.

I think at the time that the speed limit might have still been 55. Not certain, though. Because right now--it's 70, so this wouldn't be that big a deal, lol.

And "making a mockery" LOLOLOL. MOCKITY MOCK, SPEED LIMIT.

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Wavedancer, part five

Intro/Index of all parts | Read with the commentary

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I couldn't sleep, and Mike shrugged all of my attempts at making conversation, so I had to be content with mentally mapping out the rest of my week and the numerous things I had to take care of before I could be satisfied that we could face winter. Soon enough we were approaching the outskirts of Detroit. The traffic became heavier, and Mike became more aggressive, passing cars with abandon and making a mockery of the speed limit. He seemed oblivious to the glares he received from his fellow drivers. I became worried as I covertly watch the speedometer approach ninety.

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