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Bellatrixku

If I could slither,
If I could taste the dirt with
my tongue, breathe venom,

shed my skin and rise
again, new and itching to
bleed for my love, if

I could crawl, belly
in the grass, unseen, sly, to
strike hot-toothed, foaming

poison, if I could
wind my coils around you, my
lord, squeeze until you

cried my name, gave me
your cold, harsh kiss--still I would
not be satisfied.

Severusku

I dream of red hair,
a choice, a vow, a snarl, the
edge of a sharp breath

between empty night
and the hot rush of vengeance
sought. I dream of a

garden of deadly
herbs, a cauldron of something
that tastes like freedom.

Millicentku

I do not trust words
like fair. Better the snake who
tells lies, than the friend.

Fleurku

Another language, blunt
and heavy on my tongue, red
meat on my table.

Heavy and fine, the
dress in my closet, the hem
scorched, black with mud. To

begin in the dark,
the lynx uttering its flat
and fearful message,

this is not what I
would have wished, a cake smashed and
ruined on the ground,

our date now fixed and
remembered with blood and green
fire. I know I

have left safety far
behind, a shimmering well
of soft blue water.

The dark sea remains,
green and ferocious, striking
the cliff with fury.

I dream of a day
of peace, of fresh ripe figs, clean
and sweet on my tongue.

Riddleku

I crave something far
sweeter than nectar, far more
precious than gold.

Goyleku

Fire, unnatural
and wild, his eyes fierce with joy.
Then I watched him burn.

Slughornku

I see connections,
spinning in the air, rich and
full of sweet promise.

A slice of candied
pineapple, melting on the
tongue, a word in a

well-positioned ear,
a nudge and a wink and a
sly promise uttered

between the handshake
and the parting smile, I
have the touch, I see

doors opening as
I speak. Of course I will help
you, if you help me.

Billku

I can break curses
with my bare hands. Except the
one that matters most.

Ceceliaku [Cecelia was Tom Riddle senior's girlfriend in one of the memories in HBP.]

Tom is a handsome
man, we are a good match, I
begin to plan our

wedding. Violets and
sweetpeas, chiffon, point d'esprit,
vows and a manor.

We go riding, you
and I, our path lined with the
prettiest bluebells.

Snake, snake, swinging on
the door, poor simple creature,
poor cottage, poor girl.

The talk begins in
the village. Tom is engaged.
I am not alarmed

yet. But the whispers
grow from door to door, and the
stares grow longer, and

I begin to sense
my crinoline unraveling,
my flowers wilting,

my manor fading.
And there is Tom, in the street,
he looks my way but

does not see me. And
it's her, poor girl from the poor
cottage, the foul tramp's

daughter, wild-eyed, my
Tom holding her arm, but he
is not my Tom now,

is he? My love breaks
and scatters. I smile, offer
congratulations,

but I can feel the
eyes upon me, the titters
behind palms, the jests

in the pub. In my
room I lie on my bed, think
of his glassy eyes.

Albusku

A plan within a
plan, a night with barely a
chance of dawn, the tide

rises to drown us
with foaming poison and myrrh.
The only funeral

I look forward to
is my own. I have set my
traps, placed upon the

hook the finest bait.
Nothing remains, save the harsh
fall to earth. I no

longer waste time with
hope. Tom's crude end-game is in
sight. He does not see

that love is a
far better trap than any
that he could devise.

Arthurku

This house, loud and full,
this garden, these gnomes, this clock
with wondrous hands, these

cooking pots, this broom,
these broken quills, this cauldron
caked with rust, this old

owl, this Sneakoscope,
these suspicious candies, this
single mitten, these

school robes with frayed cuffs,
these daisies behind the shed,
this chestnut tree, these

broken crayons, this
bowl of ripe berries, this blue
quilt, these baby shoes

(most likely Ginny's),
this stroppy enchanted car,
this battered kettle

still smelling of tea,
this bent fork, this bottle of
sand (from Egypt?), these

mint leaves cool on the
tongue, this jar of Floo powder,
these pale shells from the

sea, this portrait of a
relative no one knows, this
empty mug with chipped

handle, this kitchen
table, scarred and lopsided,
these fine clamoring

children, this shining
warm wife, yes, I will defend
all this, to the death.

McGonagallku

There is never the
time I need. Always there is
someone crying, a

teacup with a tail,
someone hexing, a boggart
hiding homework, a

love potion gone wrong,
someone in a Vanishing
Cabinet. It does

not end. There are nights
I spend with bawling first years
(and Ogden's finest).

There are owls from
parents, howlers from parents,
Hagrid's lesson plan,

Peeves and his smashing
attempt at an ink fountain.
I try to find a

space to breathe, a cup
of tea, a moment in front
of the fire, but the

worries always flock
around me. Each year the dark
grows stronger, and we

seem to slip, but to
swim against the tide is the
only thing I know.




Previous characterku entries here and here

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Date: 2009-09-24 11:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] joanwilder.livejournal.com
OH, so well done! Ever since [livejournal.com profile] klynie1 stopped posting haiku, I've missed my regular dose of it. Just like her, you have 'the Grim gift'. :)

I like Goyle's and Fleur's, but Arthur's is my favorite. Yep, essence of why he'd defend it all to the end.
Edited Date: 2009-09-24 11:55 pm (UTC)

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Date: 2009-09-25 12:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] valis2.livejournal.com
Oh, yay!! I'm so glad you like them! And yes, I totally miss Klynie's haiku as well. Totally. It was so nice to have one each day.

I'm so glad you liked the Arthur one--I had some debates with Husband over it. *grins*

Thank you so much for the comment!

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Date: 2009-09-25 12:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] catyah.livejournal.com
These are fantastic! Like the posted above, my favorite is Arthur.

Well done, you!

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Date: 2009-09-25 12:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] valis2.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you so much! squee!

I am so glad that they turned out mostly as I had hoped. ;)

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Date: 2009-09-25 12:04 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] alabastard.livejournal.com
Well done!

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Date: 2009-09-25 12:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] valis2.livejournal.com
Wow, thank you so much! I just wish I could convince Lucius to tell me something. *grins* It's difficult for me to write him like this, for some reason.

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Date: 2009-09-25 01:49 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] alabastard.livejournal.com
peacocks in garden
dark magic hidden beneath
opulent masques

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Date: 2009-09-25 02:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] valis2.livejournal.com
Oooh, very nice! I love it!!

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Date: 2009-09-25 02:47 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] alabastard.livejournal.com
oops, missed a syllable though, meant to say:

peacocks in garden
dark magic hidden beneath
lush opulent masques


snake on a cane hiss
diabolical thought neath
platinum tresses

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Date: 2009-09-25 02:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] valis2.livejournal.com
bwahahaha! Oh yes, I can see the diabolical thoughts twirling underneath those platinum tresses...lol! These are great!

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Date: 2009-09-25 12:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chaosdancer.livejournal.com
Oh, these are all excellent! I've missed this sort of thing so much.

I honestly can't pick a favorite. I love them all. They'll stay with me.

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Date: 2009-09-25 12:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] valis2.livejournal.com
Oh, wow! Thank you so very much. Your comment rocks and I'm glowing! Glad you enjoyed!!

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Date: 2009-09-25 12:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mingbutterfly.livejournal.com
Yay!

So when I read the LJ cut, I was thinking limericks, not haiku. At first I was really surprised when they weren't funny, LOL! :D

But they are amazing. Seriously, you're a fab writer.

And I know you put Bella first because you wub me (and by extension, her). Also, she is the bestest. Muahahaha :D

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Date: 2009-09-25 01:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] valis2.livejournal.com
hahaha! Nope, not limericks, though I've been known to write those before.

And I have to admit that I did think of you when I wrote the Bellatrix haiku...hee!! And you know I wub you. *hugs*

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Date: 2009-09-25 01:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mingbutterfly.livejournal.com
OMG yay! :) Am so happy to be... part of the, um... weird kinky Bellamort love in your brain? LOL. Maybe should rephrase that.

Also have to share! Some fankid summarized Bella/Voldemort thusly: "It's revolting to think about 45 year old being in love with a 70 year old."

The laughter, it pains me. They're so far beyond age difference being the issue it's going to take fifty million years for the light from age difference to get to where they are...

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Date: 2009-09-25 02:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] valis2.livejournal.com
heee! Yep, you are definitely inspiring, lol! I love all the Bella outfits and thoughts in your journal recently.

And about the age difference--I did a similar thing in one fic between two different characters, and I had several EEW comments. heh. ;)

Bella/Volde, their love is so scaly...

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Date: 2009-09-25 01:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] r-grayjoy.livejournal.com
Hee, these are awesome! They're all fantastic, but I particularly love the Slughorn one. It's just so HIM! Hmm, love the Albus one too.

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Date: 2009-09-25 01:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] valis2.livejournal.com
Oh, wow! Thank you so very much! I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading these. Husband was not into the Albus haiku at all, but for me, it worked. ;) Glad it worked for you, too!

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Date: 2009-09-25 01:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dementordelta.livejournal.com
Wow! These are fabulous! I really loved the Arthur one! You've really captured the essence of each character!

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Date: 2009-09-25 02:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] valis2.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you SO much! Wow, such an awesome comment. I'm so glad you enjoyed reading these!! *hugs*

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Date: 2009-09-25 02:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gina-r-snape.livejournal.com
Very nice. Especially McGonagall. And Snape ;-)

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Date: 2009-09-25 03:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] valis2.livejournal.com
Oh, yay! I'm so glad there's some McG love. That's one of my faves. :) I'm so glad you enjoyed these! *giant hugs*

HP haikus

Date: 2009-09-25 08:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] catsintheattic.livejournal.com
You are the queen of haiku, dearest. I can't decide which one I like the most - they are all gorgeous!

*thinks hard*

Maybe Bill's - so poignant, Fleur's - such an insight, and Severus's - so captive of his ambivalent nature.

Thank you for sharing.

Re: HP haikus

Date: 2009-09-25 04:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] valis2.livejournal.com
Why thank you for your incredibly sweet words! I'm so glad that you enjoyed these. I love writing them so much. *hugs*

I really love Fleur's--I think she's an interesting character for so many reasons. :)

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Date: 2009-09-25 08:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tjs-whatnot.livejournal.com
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Valis!Haiku!!

Each one ended with my proclaiming, "No, THAT is my favorite!"

You just GOT these characters and showed us sides and nuances... for that alone, I think I'm going to have to say that Fleur was my absolute favorite. I love when writers (or poets!) give her depth and insights!

Great job!

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Date: 2009-09-25 08:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] valis2.livejournal.com
eeee!!! Thank you SO much, I am SO happy that you read these and enjoyed them!!

I really loved writing the Fleurku so much. I'm very intrigued by her, honestly.

You rock so much, thank you for the awesome comment!!

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Date: 2009-09-26 12:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magnetic-pole.livejournal.com
These are fabulous! So happy to run across them. Slughorn's began and ended with a bang; McGonagall's resonated; Fleur's surprised me by turning tragic in the second stanza (?)--they're all so wonderful.

Sometimes a few words
are all it takes to evoke
the feeling of life

Thanks so much! M.

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Date: 2009-09-26 12:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] valis2.livejournal.com
Oh, wow! Thank you SO much for your wonderful comment. I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading them!

McG's was one of those that just came together in the first try, and I only had to add some to the middle. I love that!

And thanks for the comment-ku! You rock!

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Date: 2009-09-26 12:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] idleleaves.livejournal.com
These are brilliant, as always. =D Looooove them.

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Date: 2009-09-26 12:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] valis2.livejournal.com
Aw, thank you so much! You're so sweet. I'm so glad you enjoyed reading them. *hugs*

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Date: 2009-10-01 06:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gypsyjolie.livejournal.com
These are great, especially Arthurku, Ceceliaku, and Bellatrixku. What red hair do you think Severus dreams of?

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Date: 2009-10-02 04:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] valis2.livejournal.com
Aw, thank you so much!! I am so fond of the Ceceliaku. I started writing it over a year ago, lol.

And I'm imagining that Severus is dreaming of Lily's red hair. :)

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Date: 2009-10-15 07:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] verdenia.livejournal.com
Wow. Wow. Wow. These are really beautiful and telling. So evocative! Love. *memories*
Fleur, Arthur, & Cecelia were my favorites.

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Date: 2009-10-16 01:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] valis2.livejournal.com
Oh, wow, thank you so very much!! I'm so glad you liked them! I love the Cecelia one, and the Fleur one is probably one of my favorites, ever. It really held together well.

Thank you so much!!

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