Hmm.

Jul. 15th, 2006 08:12 pm
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Am reading a fic where a character says something, and the tag reads "he said snappishly".

Wouldn't it be far easier to say "he snapped"?

I'm just now starting to understand economy of words, I think. I may never understand it fully (just look at tLS), but the more obvious things are starting to stand out.

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Date: 2006-07-17 05:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snapesforte.livejournal.com
I swear I was going to comment with the above comment, so it's good that it has you snorting appropriately, and laughing appreciatively. Mwa ha haa!

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